"Charlie, get up! It's time for school," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing.....
Friday, 11 March 2016 Blogging Task Friday 11th March 2016 Finish the Story
“Charlie, get up! It's time for Buckingham Palace," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing because he’s going to Buckingham Palace so he can tell that Buckingham Palace has 775 rooms these include 19 State rooms, 52 Royal and guest bedrooms, 188 staff bedrooms, 92 offices and 78 bathrooms in measurements, the building is 108 metres long across the front, 120 metres deep and 24 metres high. The Queen was really impressed and told Charlie what happened to his dad. The Queen said “YOU ARE NOW the KING of me “! When he went to school he was surprised everyone bowed down to him. And he got to live in the palaces forever and his name was King Charles the 3.
"Scarlet get up it's time to go to Harry Potter world" called mum from the hallway. normally she would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different today was just amazing. Scarlet ran downstairs and walked out the door. she and her mum drove to Harry Potter world and Scarlet bought Luna's wand and had loads of chocolate frogs. Then she stayed a week in Hogwarts Cool she thought. on the Thursday she met all the actors and J.K. Rowling at their houses. when she touched Voldemorts nose she freaked out she also watched the movies and the plays she had a Christmas feast too. the it was time to go she had, had a great time.
Harry its time to wake up shouted his mother from down stairs.Normally he rolls over and go to sleep.But today was different.Today was going to be amazing Harry's mum said you can buy anything you want Harry said i want a dog so harry's mum bought a dog if you have a dog you need good responsibility. Harry said okay but he didn't care when he became twenty we was taking the dog for a walk. He fell and the lead fell out of his hands.And he should of listened to his mum.
"April get up, We are getting late to go to the Shard" shouted mum bossily. Usually she would just role over and go back to bed but today it was different, and she leaped out of bed like a kangaroo. She brushed her teeth, took a bath, put on her clothes and everybody marched out of the door. She and her family walked to Hownslow East train station and caught a train to Central London. When they got to the train station they had to get map because they were completely lost but luckily her dad figured out the directions to the Shard. When they got the outside of the Shard it looked taller than she expected it to be. Then they went in and climbed up to the 64th floor(the highest floor).When they got there she noticed there was no roof so it was so cold she felt cold even when she wore her coat. Then she started to find different landmarks such as the Tower of London and Buckingham Palace. Then she put my hand into her pocket take out her lip balm and it wasn't there. She rushed to my mum and dad to inform them and then they went in the lift to check on the other floors. It wasn't there . Then a man came up to them. He was the man in the lift that she saw. "Here, you left this in the lift " said the man in a low voice handing over the tube of lip balm. Then her parents got angry at her and banded her from playing on the computer.
As they had a school trip to the west minister and the house of parliament.He could not wait to see the Big Bin and the famous surroundings. It was going to be one off the best days of his life. he had prepared things he needed for the trip which included a camera for taking pictures. The most exciting thing about the trip was the boat ride through the Thames river. By Hayan
"Charlie, get up! It's time for school," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing he was going to have the best day ever. All he had to do was try to be good in school today was a school trip and everyone had brought their best packed lunch and so had charlie BUT!, he did not have the best-est lunch he had a boring lunch he had a cheese and ham sandwich,some grapes and cookies and for a drink just an actimel Everybody else had... chicken, or pizza cheese sandwich and beefy burgers! He was not enjoying this day at all. he said to himself yeah! that's rite full STOP....(here okay)....^ Soon it was time to go back to school and then it was......... home time!!!
"Kim get up!It's time for school.Shouted his mum from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep again but today was different. Today was going to be amazing. It was the morning. Kim woke up himself. He wasn't tired at all. It was very early it was 4 o'Clock. It was his birthday! Kim rushed down to look at his present s that his dad brought yesterday for Kim's birthday.
"Charlie, get up! It's time for school," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing today he had a mind-blowing plan. Today he would leave school and have a trip to Buckingham palace. His mum never let him so he went at school. Finally it was break now was his chance to get to Buckingham palace. He ran to he ran to his friends and they tried and tried to get over the fence to get to Buckingham palace but it wouldn’t work. At least a few of them got out. After a while the teacher came and they got told off. At least he got to miss literacy and maths! Sadly we missed a little of our lunch. But we still got over the gate!! He and his friends went to Charlie’s house when his mum wasn’t looking he stole his mums purse and took a few coins and left. Luckily now they could take buss. They got a piece of paper. ”please may we have a pen” ”you may “ “ what are you doing” asked Charlie. “When you arrive at Buckingham palace you need an invitation from the queen.” Whispered William.” Oh no the bus has stopped write quick”……….” Done!” “Soldier the queen is having a party and she invited us. If you do not believe us……….here this is the invitation” said Charlie. “ENTER“ he said.” Whoohoo” they whispered! HALF AN HOUR LATER! “That trip was EPIC!!
LORA GET UP! moaned her annoying brother. Usually she would ignore him and sleep but today was different today was going to be extraordinary. Her mum went up and dragged her down and Lora went in the car and went swimming. Finally she went in her dressing room and changed. Finally she went in the pool and played Simon said. Then when they got home she had a warm mug of milk and went to bed.
"Maja, get up! It's time for school," shouted her mother from the landing. Usually she would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing because she needed to know her Grammar school . There came a letter for her Grammar school. She ran down stairs. She picked up the letter. Her Grammar school was Tiffin Girls. And she was waiting to he news with her friends.
"Charlie, get up! It's time for school," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing..... Because Charlie is going to Legoland and he cannot be later, he need to be in the School at 8am and everybody will be waiting for him, they will have a great time. The end
…Today was going to be wonderful because he was going to Saint Pauls Cathedral. There are 528 steps in total. When he got there he saw a gigantic dome. It was gold. In the dome there was a golden gallery. His trip was wonderful.
Friday, 11 March 2016
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Finish the Story
“Charlie, get up! It's time for Buckingham Palace," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing because he’s going to Buckingham Palace so he can tell that Buckingham Palace has 775 rooms these include 19 State rooms, 52 Royal and guest bedrooms, 188 staff bedrooms, 92 offices and 78 bathrooms in measurements, the building is 108 metres long across the front, 120 metres deep and 24 metres high. The Queen was really impressed and told Charlie what happened to his dad. The Queen said “YOU ARE NOW the KING of me “! When he went to school he was surprised everyone bowed down to him. And he got to live in the palaces forever and his name was King Charles the 3.
good work kaivy that is such a good story
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"Scarlet get up it's time to go to Harry Potter world" called mum from the hallway. normally she would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different today was just amazing. Scarlet ran downstairs and walked out the door. she and her mum drove to Harry Potter world and Scarlet bought Luna's wand and had loads of chocolate frogs. Then she stayed a week in Hogwarts Cool she thought. on the Thursday she met all the actors and J.K. Rowling at their houses. when she touched Voldemorts nose she freaked out she also watched the movies and the plays she had a Christmas feast too. the it was time to go she had, had a great time.
ReplyDeletegood work Sienna that is such a good story
DeleteHarry its time to wake up shouted his mother from down stairs.Normally he rolls over and go to sleep.But today was different.Today was going to be amazing Harry's mum said you can buy anything you want Harry said i want a dog so harry's mum bought a dog if you have a dog you need good responsibility. Harry said okay but he didn't care when he became twenty we was taking the dog for a walk. He fell and the lead fell out of his hands.And he should of listened to his mum.
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Deletedziugas that is such a good story
GREAT WORK
Delete"April get up, We are getting late to go to the Shard" shouted mum bossily. Usually she would just role over and go back to bed but today it was different, and she leaped out of bed like a kangaroo. She brushed her teeth, took a bath, put on her clothes and everybody marched out of the door. She and her family walked to Hownslow East train station and caught a train to Central London. When they got to the train station they had to get map because they were completely lost but luckily her dad figured out the directions to the Shard. When they got the outside of the Shard it looked taller than she expected it to be. Then they went in and climbed up to the 64th floor(the highest floor).When they got there she noticed there was no roof so it was so cold she felt cold even when she wore her coat. Then she started to find different landmarks such as the Tower of London and Buckingham Palace. Then she put my hand into her pocket take out her lip balm and it wasn't there. She rushed to my mum and dad to inform them and then they went in the lift to check on the other floors. It wasn't there . Then a man came up to them. He was the man in the lift that she saw. "Here, you left this in the lift " said the man in a low voice handing over the tube of lip balm. Then her parents got angry at her and banded her from playing on the computer.
ReplyDeleteAs they had a school trip to the west minister and the house of parliament.He could not wait to see the Big Bin and the famous surroundings. It was going to be one off the best days of his life.
ReplyDeletehe had prepared things he needed for the trip which included a camera for taking pictures.
The most exciting thing about the trip was the boat ride through the Thames river.
By Hayan
"Charlie, get up! It's time for school," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing he was going to have the best day ever. All he had to do was try to be good in school today was a school trip and everyone had brought their best packed lunch and so had charlie BUT!, he did not have the best-est lunch he had a boring lunch he had a cheese and ham sandwich,some grapes and cookies and for a drink just an actimel Everybody else had... chicken, or pizza cheese sandwich and beefy burgers! He was not enjoying this day at all. he said to himself yeah! that's rite full STOP....(here okay)....^ Soon it was time to go back to school and then it was......... home time!!!
ReplyDelete"Kim get up!It's time for school.Shouted his mum from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep again but today was different. Today was going to be amazing. It was the morning. Kim woke up himself. He wasn't tired at all. It was very early it was 4 o'Clock. It was his birthday! Kim rushed down to look at his present s that his dad brought yesterday for Kim's birthday.
ReplyDelete"Charlie, get up! It's time for school," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing today he had a mind-blowing plan. Today he would leave school and have a trip to Buckingham palace. His mum never let him so he went at school.
ReplyDeleteFinally it was break now was his chance to get to Buckingham palace. He ran to he ran to his friends and they tried and tried to get over the fence to get to Buckingham palace but it wouldn’t work. At least a few of them got out. After a while the teacher came and they got told off. At least he got to miss literacy and maths! Sadly we missed a little of our lunch. But we still got over the gate!!
He and his friends went to Charlie’s house when his mum wasn’t looking he stole his mums purse and took a few coins and left. Luckily now they could take buss. They got a piece of paper. ”please may we have a pen” ”you may “ “ what are you doing” asked Charlie. “When you arrive at Buckingham palace you need an invitation from the queen.” Whispered William.” Oh no the bus has stopped write quick”……….” Done!” “Soldier the queen is having a party and she invited us. If you do not believe us……….here this is the invitation” said Charlie. “ENTER“ he said.” Whoohoo” they whispered! HALF AN HOUR LATER! “That trip was EPIC!!
LORA GET UP! moaned her annoying brother. Usually she would ignore him and sleep but today was different today was going to be extraordinary.
ReplyDeleteHer mum went up and dragged her down and Lora went in the car and went swimming. Finally she went in her dressing room and changed.
Finally she went in the pool and played Simon said. Then
when they got home she had a warm mug of milk and went to bed.
"Maja, get up! It's time for school," shouted her mother from the landing. Usually she would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing because she needed to know her Grammar school . There came a letter for her Grammar school. She ran down stairs. She picked up the letter. Her Grammar school was Tiffin Girls. And she was waiting to he news with her friends.
ReplyDelete"Charlie, get up! It's time for school," shouted his mother from the landing. Usually he would just roll over and go back to sleep but today was different. Today was going to be amazing.....
ReplyDeleteBecause Charlie is going to Legoland and he cannot be later, he need to be in the School at 8am and everybody will be waiting for him, they will have a great time.
The end
…Today was going to be wonderful because he was going to Saint Pauls Cathedral. There are 528 steps in total. When he got there he saw a gigantic dome. It was gold. In the dome there was a golden gallery. His trip was wonderful.
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