Tuesday 8 September 2015

Mystery and Suspense


This week we have been learning about stories of mystery and suspense. Your task is to write a description of this spooky setting. Remember to use lots of interesting adjectives and at least one simile.


I'm looking forward to reading them. Don't forget to comment on each others work! Your homework must have been completed by Friday 18th September. 

24 comments:

  1. This spooky house might be a haunted house. Some sort of which might live there.I wonder if their would be some bat's in their,I've never been in such a spooky,scary,dark house. their may be some ghosts inside the spooky,creepy house. This house is as creepy as a spooky night!!!!!!!!!! by Marco

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  3. Taimur Shah said...
    This could be haunted house. It looks desertet and old. Or it could have been designed
    For hallween night. The scene is set in a spooky area . The weather is as stormy as a Friday the 13th night in winter. The night is as dark as a black cats fur.it's as spooky as it can be.
    Hayan

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  4. Taimur Shah said...
    This could be haunted house. It looks desertet and old. Or it could have been designed
    For hallween night. The scene is set in a spooky area . The weather is as stormy as a Friday the 13th night in winter. The night is as dark as a black cats fur.it's as spooky as it can be.
    Hayan

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  5. I think that this house is a haunted house and a goblin lives there! Outside a strong gale blew a howling scream!As I walked I saw a shadow! The End.....
    by Yuvika

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  7. This house looks really creepy and a an old,cheap,ugly,disgusting πŸ‘ΉπŸ‘ΊπŸ‘»πŸ˜‘πŸ˜ˆπŸ‘Ώ ,villains used to live there

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  9. The house is dark and spooky I bet there is a wicked obnoxious witch living inside the house with a whole library of spells. It’s very cold and stormy because the witch has just made a bad spell so it started to go all scary. I can hear the crackling of the witch inside and booms of thunder followed by crackle of lighting. I can smell the burning of something being burnt by the lighting which makes it smell of smoke and I cough a lot. I can taste the watery spit that’s dribbling it out of my mouth because I’m scared of what will happen to me. In front of me there are black slippery steps and wet banisters and a dark black door with two petrifying metal animals. This house is spookier than a lions teeth it’s also as scary as a crocodile. I’ve loved every one of your comments they are extremely descriptive.

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  10. The house is a mysterious, menacing mansion. Inside the mansion, it is pitch black and a petrifying poltergeist resides in it. Nobody dares to walk past the mansion's gates and if they do, then they wouldn't make it back!

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  11. This house is haunted and it looks terrifying because there are stone devils standing on the gates. They make me think there are monsters living here, they wake up after sunset and sleep during day. Legend says “the house is alive once a year”. Creepy noises and whiney voices which are very loud you can hear them from either a short distance or a far distance. I think there is a Dracula on the top floor having a nap. The night sky matches the house perfectly because they are both spooky. The lightning makes it even spookier. Some of the windows are broken by bats flying through the windows. The top window has a light but the others are dark.

    By Hamza

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  12. This is a haunted house. A creepy,scary man must be living there in this haunted house He might scare us in the night.It is a stormy night.It could be the church hall of The Mystery of the Lantern Light.There are two ghost statues standing by the broken front gates.The creepy man might be reading a spell book for his next plot

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  13. This is a haunted house where bloody monsters live. There was a blood message written in front of the haunted house. I think there would be a slimy germs and spider webs around. May be inside there will be someone calling me upstairs.

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  14. THIS IS A WONDFUL thing about the story there so much things
    about story fun ecsiting andamazing and baeutiful

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  15. ''This is a spooky story about .The ghost living in the castle''. If you won't to read it you can or the teacher wold read it for you .Now i am going to start the story.''one day
    a girl just ran to a spooky house and her farther and her mum said to her do not go to
    the ocean sea's but she did not hear wot her farther and her mum said to the girl do not go there but she still did not hear her and then she went to a stop
    and she saw a old ship and she knocked and then some-body said ''hello and she saw a big black and white ghost and she said ''hello again and they started to be happy now and she said to her mum and dad i went to the ocean
    am sorry her mum said that's all right.

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  16. It is a haunted house it is very haunted

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  17. This house is dark and spooky ,terrifying and frightened. I think there is hobgoblin and witch is laughing together.This is a haunted house and there are lots of spiders hanging in that house.In there it was cold so it was stormy to I think there is wild animals in that house .There is some more scary people and it kill children.In that house there is a ghost wrote a message that called I am coming
    for you.
    from Hansa

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  18. the house was spooky and dark teriifiiing and fritening.i think that there are ghosts
    that i am scead .i see these houses in my bad dream and when i was whaching
    cartoon.i hope dont see this house in my dream or iin the cartoon because i like
    coulerful houses then i am very happy and not sad and i am not sceard.

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